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1. International fashion trends exert influence on numerous aspects of nowadays people’s attire.

   A number of individuals believe that the sales of scientifically proven detrimental food or drinks should be forbidden.

   In terms of buildings design, the intended use is the most instrumental element instead of its exterior.

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2. Without paying is impossible: even though cost reduce: eliminate the need for paper and
   publish > some cost inevitable: developing & updating software, cites or apps

   Printed books always play significant roles: Sometimes second-handed books with reasonable prices , ALSO , counterfeit or low-quality copy of genuine masterpiece meet a lot of needs >> a plenty of people tend to buy this kind of materials

   A number of individuals love printed contents> touch papers : cutting-edge devices like tablets and laptops cannot substitute for conventional pen and paper

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3. It is said that nobody will purchase printed contents such as books in the future, thanks to access online version free. I strongly believe that it will occur in the near future mainly for concern about environmental problems

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4. In terms of revenue, income from advertising is more substantial than that from sales. These days, a number of movies and programs are released on platforms such as Youtube free. Platforms achieve fame through this manner and are more popular. Thus, they receive long-term benefits by means of free online publishing. As a result, press generate advertising revenue by publishing all their content online for free.

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5. Counterargument (CA)
   Some may argue that a number of individuals love to touch papers, hold books in hand and highlight with pen or even write notes with conventional pencils, but I think cutting-edge technology has been very real and user-friendly via providing multitude astonishing features that facilitate these work, and people feel no difference.

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6. Thanks to state-of-the-art technology, nowadays students deal with computers and files for doing their homework or reading on a screen. By degrees, they are addicted to working with these kinds of contents. Therefore, they cannot tolerate conventional books and newspapers, and even find them awkward. Now students grow up then will become future adults. Thus, adults and young people will read on screen in the future. Consequently, nobody will purchase printed materials.

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7. A lot of firms sponsor sports for advertising themselves. Even though a number of individuals believe that this is useful for the world of sports, others argue that this have pernicious effects on it. This essay will discuss both these views before presenting my own.
   When it comes to upsides, companies support sports, the financial burden is alleviated. Costs including essential incomes for athletes or necessary money for infrastructure such as renovating stadiums and maintaining courts, while other revenues like selling tickets or tournament rewards are not adequate. Thus, advertising incomes account for a considerable part of revenues. More talents are also discovered. When athletes participate in advertisements, more people get familiar with them and their sports. It entices people to follow this sports. As a result, top talents are identified because athletes’ population has increased.
   We cannot overlook some downsides. Most of the time corruption is rooted in companies’ support. When companies sponsor sports, they spend exorbitant money. Therefore, consider matches an investment they pursue the most benefits. Even They interfere in systems and matches which devastates fair play. They want to achieve their favorable result via bribery and dealings. Moreover, the money may corrupt athletes’ characters. Many sports stars are really young. If the young receive a substantial amount of money from sponsors, feeling they are cream of the crop. Thus, they become unbearably arrogant. they lose motivation for practicing and being hard-working. Eventually, their sports performance has deteriorated.
   I think corruption can be prevented through exact monitoring and athletes’ characters can be preserved by means of ongoing raising awareness. Whereas generating sponsorship revenues come in handy for supporting athletes, maintaining infrastructure and exploring talents which is precious.

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8. These days, the population of adult computer games’ players is increasing. In this essay I will explain the reason behind this trend and also explain why it is a negative phenomenon.
   Games have become more interesting because technology is progressing significantly. Thus, quality of computer sounds and images have enhanced astonishingly that making games more similar to real circumstances. This computer simulation can violate some existing limitations in the real world. Adults are capable of gaining some experiences while that are inaccessible in their life. For instance, players can ride an F-14 jet in the games as identical as the real world. Which is enticing for adults.
   We cannot overlook some downsides of playing for adults. First, playing computer games may exert negative influences on individuals’ health. Nowadays, sedentary lifestyle is ubiquitous among urban citizens. Many people have desk jobs, so they must carry out numerous tasks dealing with computers for long hours. Imagine after work, they dedicate some of their spare time to playing computers games, which leads to less activities. Obviously, their health gets worse. For example, they gain excess weight. Moreover, it can result in waste of more time. Cutting-edge games are so attractive that when people are dealing with, they can lose track of time. While they spend hours playing there is no time for other tasks such as daily chores. Some may argue that soft skills like problem- solving ability may hone through playing, but I think this is feasible to achieve through various manners.
   In conclusion, computer games are more astonishing, which attracts more and more adults. I think adult well-being is deteriorating and people waste more time playing. So this is a negative development.

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